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Recordings Recording: Eight Lacks that Torpedo a Good Manuscript with Donald Maass
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Recording: Eight Lacks that Torpedo a Good Manuscript with Donald Maass

$19.00

What triggers rejection of manuscripts is often not what’s “wrong” but what’s missing.  In this hands-on webinar, we’ll explore eight areas in which most manuscripts could be strengthened: overly sequential narration; scene intention; set up; emotional surprise; invisible arc; under-developed secondaries; strength of voice; prose values; and the elusive element called fearlessness.

Add To Cart $19: Recording - Eight Lacks

What triggers rejection of manuscripts is often not what’s “wrong” but what’s missing.  In this hands-on webinar, we’ll explore eight areas in which most manuscripts could be strengthened: overly sequential narration; scene intention; set up; emotional surprise; invisible arc; under-developed secondaries; strength of voice; prose values; and the elusive element called fearlessness.

What triggers rejection of manuscripts is often not what’s “wrong” but what’s missing.  In this hands-on webinar, we’ll explore eight areas in which most manuscripts could be strengthened: overly sequential narration; scene intention; set up; emotional surprise; invisible arc; under-developed secondaries; strength of voice; prose values; and the elusive element called fearlessness.

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